Well, i've seen people do this here before, so I decided since I haven't actually shown any display of my voice before, might as well show a song off. Its called Judgment day, we just uploaded it on our myspace, and all we had to go on was an SM58, some outdated recording software, and a very slow computer. So without further excuses, go check it out

www.myspace.com/flawedlogik

Tell me what you think. If you hear any vocal problems (other than my forced and sometimes uneven vibrato) Let me know. I want to know what to work on.

Cool song! Very metal hairstyle, if that's actually you. :D

I didn't mind your vibrato at all... your control and enunciation are just fine. The only objection I have is that you tend to "thin out" the voice when you don't really need to... I know, this could just be a tonal preference of yours, but it just doesn't speak to my ears. I would find it a lot cooler if you had fuller, more powerful tone. For example, your tone in the quiet section was just great. I just think in the heavy section, you should sound more powerful.

But all in all, cool band you've got there! You're out there gigging, which is great in itself.

Ya thats actually me. You know i've never actually had someone comment on the fullness of my tone, guess I always thought it was pretty full, but now that you mention it, I am a bit stronger in that quiet part.

Guess i'll have to work more on transcending tone in that area of my range. Thats the area right below my break through a majority of the song, so I guess i've been lazy with it. Thanks for the input Legatoman, its the only way I learn, and I'll take critisism from people here much more constructively than I would anywhere else, as i'm surrounded by people who know what they are talking about, heheh.